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nae's avatar

thank you for reading my work 🫶🏻

imaan's avatar

wow :( amazing amazing amazing 💕

nae's avatar

stop thank you very much I look up to your writing so much 😭🤍

أنيسة ⏾⋆.˚'s avatar

WOW. this is my favourite style of writing, it’s so devastatingly intense and i resonate so deeply with it start to finish. even the song?? one of my top played neighbourhood songs too IM SCARED. thank you for existing and sharing such a tragic but beautifully articulated piece!!🫂 <3

nae's avatar
Apr 14Edited

aneesa you’re too kind oh my gosh. I’m so glad you could resonate with this piece of sorrow, thank you so very much for reading my work :)!!🫶🏻

Gypsy Queen's avatar

Wow. Just. Wow. Powerful.

nae's avatar

thank you so much!

Aigbonoga Precious's avatar

Oh this is so tragically beautiful❤️

nae's avatar

thank you sm for reading! :)

Aigbonoga Precious's avatar

My pleasure really 😊

alif | الف's avatar

nae.. this is so devastating yet beautiful. this genuinely made my heart hurt, you could feel the pain in this piece almost like the words themselves were bleeding. tragic yet poetic, may your longing find a peaceful place to rest one day - you deserve the world x

nae's avatar

as do you I wish the same for you thank you kind alif you are so so kind and deserve the same kindness you give everyone

thesecondmovement's avatar

this is so beautiful, I loved reading this. thank you for writing <3

nae's avatar

thank you sm for reading !!🫶🏻

umyaaa's avatar

Sienna 😄☝🏼

Take a damn loaded gun and just kill me

IM JUST ASTONISHED BEYOND LIMITS RN HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE SOMETHING SO SO TRAGIC BUT OH SO FULL OF LOVEEE??? NEVER LEAVE THIS APP AGAIN I LOVE YOU HERE SO MUCH

nae's avatar
Mar 16Edited

STOP IT umya how kind you are 🫶🏻 thank you for always reading my work and appreciating it :))

Sana's avatar

I want you violently. I need you desperately. Do you feel my pain? Can you hear it? Will someone please listen to me?

Siennaaaa, this is the biggest fear of avoidantly attached me.

For some reason this sounds like a negative sequal to my last poem Philophobia. ❤️‍🩹

nae's avatar

I just read your poem it’s so beautifully tragic. I am going to be honest it is written from the other side because I am not avoidant hah. Also I wanted to say though I do understand that it is not something you can control it is important to not resist the love given to you for it is given for a reason and the giver always thinks and believes you are worthy of such love which is why they offer it anyways.

Sana's avatar

I will remember this 😭

Paro's avatar

Sienna always butchering my heart with her words, this is so tragically beautiful 🤧♡

nae's avatar

this made my whole day thank you kind kind paro 🫶🏻🫶🏻☹️

.*• Ayat ☆'s avatar

we are soooo backkk

nae's avatar

shadys back bitches

maira's avatar

Death will be kinder than the world that prefers us apart, evidently so.

CAN I PUT THIS IN MY BIO

nae's avatar
Mar 5Edited

omg yes sure I’d be honoured :))

maira's avatar

you have my dream writing style 🙏🏻

nae's avatar

that’s such a nice compliment omg thank you!! 🫶🏻

Aliza's avatar

How one can write so beautifully?? 🤧🤍

nae's avatar

you’re the sweetest ever thank you! 🫶🏻

Aliza's avatar

WELL NOW I'M SAD ☹️☹️

nae's avatar

stop though I am too don’t be sad liza we gotta push through 🙁🙁🫶🏻

Aliza's avatar

Yeahhh sighs ☹️🤍

Gypsy Queen's avatar

Holy Jesus, that was incredible.

That pretty much summed up the internal pain near self torture I had and ending a relationship a little over a month ago.

I had to end it. I needed to protect myself.

The relationship was beyond toxic. I had to set myself free and put on my oxygen mask… And the same time I loved this person so much. I love him more than anyone I ever had this time on earth.

I loved the person I was when I was with him.

It was so unhealthy for me and I had to stop it.

I had to leave.

I had to go no contact to save myself.

nae's avatar
Apr 6Edited

ahh you were a victim </3 I hope you’re writing from a better place now

I understand the pain aspect of what you described the love is unconditional and their absence is unbearable the only thing keeping me going is believing they’re better off without me.

thank you for reading my work gypsy I hope you’re in a better place now 🫶🏻